We had to writte a story in groups.
(Quantity of expressions used, originality of the story, quality of English, grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation.)
My group is composed of Gabrielle, Adrien, Camille B, Sébastien Marg. and me, Camille D.
Last week, on my way back home, I met a man who told me his neighbour was an alien.
According to him, this alien didn’t like the pressure of his job on his planet so he decided to take a break.
He arrived in Washington during the American Independence War. It was a bit of a shock so he moved to France. Unfortunately, the French people were also fighting against their government at that time.
He found he did not like rioting because his extra-terrestrial education hasn’t prepared him to it.
He eventually settled in North Vancouver and opened his own translation center.
After 200 years on Earth, dealing with Human beings everyday, he still has trouble understanding our social standards. People there weren’t used to his blue skin and were a bit scared of his 5 legs.
On the other hand, he was successful at using his alien skills to promote his company, and he’s now multi-billionaire.
Or maybe that man was just drunk…
In that paragraph, you wrote writte instead of write. It must have been a problem when you wrote it.